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home furnishings and more by ~xxl:iconxxl:



canary candlesticks matching the mantlepiece,
wet paint on a new car.
a crate full of butter.
jugglers in a line,
bagged fruit.
trumpets polished
with cherry-scented
oils.
fishy, fleshy seed pods,
nutition or leftovers,
uninspired or a knuckle-dragger,
a brand new steak.

he's got cranberry hands
©2007-2009 ~xxl
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great use of alliteration an overall very well established poem. i love the textures and use of food stuffs in the imigary. i adopt a lot of foods and textures in my images in my writing and i have found we have very similar writing styles. that may be why i can really "see" this poem (if that makes any sence?).

anyway i will stop talkin.

congrats on a great piece. :+fav:

Phil

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